Wednesday, November 14, 2007

Always…

Days started – days stopped
Deep past the eye escaped
Down near river round da alley –

Yikes screamed Dan nagging graciously –
Yodeling gratitude echoing greatly
Yellow whales startled down near river.

Roads streets signs sidewalks – sunnier
Roses stop peoples sullenness soaring greatly year round -
Round damned determined doomful living grieves souls

Start teaching God’s
Significant talented deeds
Started daily – yup

People excited days-days-days stop-
Ping grown? Never! Restless souls stop
People….

never




First word of each stanza has same letter. Last letter of every word starts the next word... I know that the end gets confusing but it'll make a lot of sense... so ask if you need to!

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Hey, I liked your Oulipo, it has a great etherial sort of flavor. I have enjoyed reading your blog, and I hope you have a great thanksgiving.